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    My best work I think ;D

    Post  Rukia_Kuchiki on Sun 22 May 2011, 2:21 pm

    This is titled "The Moon and the Sun". Enjoy :3
    Notes: Red - Ichigo / Violet - Rukia

    Fear the Hollow inside... He's going to rip off your heart and leave you here... Bleeding... Suffering... Wondering... Waiting... for your last breathe to come...
    He's like a shadow… Always following you around. No matter where you going, no matter where you hide… He will always be with you, in your heart, in your soul, waiting for a chance to reveal himself and kill who you love the most… The emotions you can't control, like anger or madness, are what keep him alive… When he gets out, your heart disappears, your soul gets dark as the night and you become blind… He controls your body now while your mind is blind and your true soul sleeps… You stay like this, locked inside a monster, waiting for the light that will guide you through the darkness…

    That light is her.
    Silent and shiny, she lights the dark night… Her quiet steps can't be heard, her body can't be seen and her soul can't be sensed… She travels slower through the night, searching for you, for your bleeding heart and your blind mind… She will find you somehow and she will fight alone your worst nightmare with all her shine just to keep you safe… Her warm light will reach you in your darkest moments, guiding your dark soul into the moonlight… Your Hollow will became blind and she will help you locking him away in the deeps of your still bleeding heart. Placing her soft and warm hand over your heart, she will heal it, piece by piece, keeping him from breaking apart again… Holding your hand, she will guide you through her silent night, kissing your lips softly and keeping you warm…
    Then the dawn came…
    She will disappear with the first ray of your powerful shine that lights up the day…
    You promise to see her again when the twilight comes…
    She's gone…
    You're alone…
    She whispers sweet words to the wind, wondering if you will ever listen to them…
    You hear her whispers; you feel her pain and loneliness…
    She wants you to know that her love for you is still alive…
    You feel the cold filling your now empty heart…
    And they both close their eyes.
    Tears start to fall down; the sadness still hurts more than lies.
    It starts to rain.
    Covering the earth in small raindrops, pure melody
    Only the ones who love like they both do can hear it
    Quiet…
    Loud…
    Cold…
    Warm…
    Binding their distant hearts together now
    And forever.
    And the twilight came.

    You lose your shine…
    She wins hers…
    But it doesn't matter anymore.
    Because a love like the one you share,
    Only a few can have.
    And because she is he's only one,
    They don't mind in wait till noon.
    Just because she is his cold moon,
    And he is her warm sun.


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    The Waltz of Meaningless Words

    Post  wongy06 on Sun 22 May 2011, 2:30 pm

    Well then, here's one of mine. x3

    Love. Forever. Such meaningless words, no?
    Who truly realises Love's meaning
    When Love is but a mirage in the snow -
    The plummeting cold of a heart's aching?
    And when forever ends in an instant,
    Who can pledge, or even trust, endless time?
    Even grown, a human bawls like an infant -
    Loud yet gesticulative as a mime.
    Thus, come and allow me to teach you now
    The real truth behind Love and forever.
    So upon you and I, let Love endow
    A rope of Love that will never sever.
    Bound together, let us dance the night through
    And learn our forever when we come to.
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    Re: My best work I think ;D

    Post  Rukia_Kuchiki on Sun 22 May 2011, 2:33 pm

    Sooo sweet O:

    I love it :3


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    Re: My best work I think ;D

    Post  wongy06 on Sun 22 May 2011, 2:58 pm

    When a rose buds in the joy of summer -
    It's petals stretching over timeless lakes -
    I think of nothing but us together
    And memories of certain sleepless wakes.
    And when music plays on a moonlit night
    I want nothing more than to take your hand
    And dance the night through 'til the morning light
    When we will collapse and move to Dreamland.
    And when I dream in my cold, lonely bed,
    I dream of you and the times that we share.
    Without you, I would prefer to be dead
    And, for you, this is my soul laid out bare:
    I think that I love you, I really do.
    In fact, I'm sure of it. Yes... I. Love. You.
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    Re: My best work I think ;D

    Post  Rukia_Kuchiki on Sun 22 May 2011, 4:08 pm

    Oh o:

    It's sooo beautiful :')
    So lovely ^-^


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    Post  wongy06 on Mon 23 May 2011, 12:32 pm

    Before us ripples the skin of the lake,
    Above us ripples the cover of night;
    And together - in this tryst we partake -
    We secret under the moon's waning light.
    Then, I cannot call this a tryst at all
    For I have no one else for me, do you?
    It is only for you that I can fall
    And surely, you must know this to be true.
    It is the mere touching of lip on lip
    Yet how can it make me feel so complete?
    If I must sip poison, then I will sip
    Just for us two to be able to meet.
    Even if you should be the one Death picks,
    I would bring you back from the River Styx.



    Blegh... Finished a little more morose than I wanted it to but oh well~ x3
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    Re: My best work I think ;D

    Post  Rukia_Kuchiki on Mon 23 May 2011, 2:29 pm

    You have a talent to write sonnets ^-^

    This one is really sweet as well :3


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    The Meaning of Inspiration

    Post  wongy06 on Mon 23 May 2011, 2:58 pm

    Some may wonder how I can write sonnets
    When each day is filled with difficulties.
    Well in my mind each syllable just fits
    Like fresh green leaves in summer fit the trees.
    Of course, it is not without frugal aid.
    For my words, someone must be there to hear,
    To speak of the best laid plans I have made.
    To you, not even angels would compare
    For you are like my world to me, my life.
    For you, I would speak 'til I could no more
    Or bear the burden of the whole world's strife
    Or walk proudly and firmly through Death's door.
    You are my inspiration, my warm heart.
    I love you. Three words that I must impart.
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    Re: My best work I think ;D

    Post  Rukia_Kuchiki on Mon 23 May 2011, 3:08 pm

    Awww Q.Q

    So sweet o: *Bunny glomps*


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    Re: My best work I think ;D

    Post  wongy06 on Wed 25 May 2011, 11:50 am

    =O
    *Is bunny glomped* XDDD
    Glad you like it. ;D
    One more~ x3


    The endless sky of possibilities
    Stretches in front of us to our futures.
    I search among the stars to try to seize
    A path where our relationship matures.
    It is hard and almost devoid of chance
    For only one in each billion path
    Shows a future in which we laugh and dance
    But I will find it just to hear you laugh;
    Just to carry you when you cannot walk,
    Just to comfort you when you cry at night,
    Just to laugh with each other when we talk
    And to make the world once again seem right...
    After all, you are my most precious flame.
    Of course I must ask: do you feel the same?
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    Re: My best work I think ;D

    Post  Khai on Wed 01 Jun 2011, 8:05 pm

    Okay...everyones posting sonnets so i wanna post one :3 here goes nothing...
    The reason I chose "you"...
    Thats simple.

    I know that I am the type of person that you "hate"
    For a person like you, who lives their life honestly and unselfishly, Just watching my existance is irritating, isnt it?

    Hey..

    If the feelings had been just a little reversed,

    I would have easly fallen into your trap.
    Its not that good but some feedback would be nice anyway. :3 I hope you enjoied it ^-^"
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    Re: My best work I think ;D

    Post  wongy06 on Fri 03 Jun 2011, 11:16 am

    Interesting... O.O"

    It suggests the writer is dishonest and selfish and thus irritates the subject yet the whole poem is written completely honestly and straightforward with the feeling of love. ;o
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    Re: My best work I think ;D

    Post  Fear on Fri 03 Jun 2011, 3:19 pm

    Lovely sonnets ^_^

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